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Hints
for writing a mystery story.
This was
taken from the Internet. I can not remember where. If
someone knows, please email me so I can give the author due credit. cathygrim@aol.com
There
are a lot of elements to writing a mystery. These tips should help you
brainstorm! Read through them, and start making notes for your mystery.
1.
Every story begins with an idea. Keep your eyes,
ears, and mind open to ideas. Ask yourself what if? Try looking for
ideas as you read the newspaper. Did burglars hit three houses on one
street in the middle of the day? How did they know no one would be home?
What were the burglars looking for? What if you decided to be a
detective and solved the crime? Use the newspaper story as a springboard
and jump into your own idea.
- Your main character is
the most important part of your story. The main character
will determine in which direction the plot will grow. Is your main
character a new girl at school who covers up her insecurity by
bragging a lot? How will her personality affect the way the story is
solved? Step inside your character's mind. Then ask yourself,
"Now what will I do?"
- Choose minor
characters who will be in your story. Does your main
character have a best friend who will help her sort out the clues?
Best friends are good to include, because the main character needs
someone to talk to. Are there people who don't want the main
character to solve the mystery? Who are they?
- The plot of any story
is this: The main character has a problem, and must solve it by him
or herself. In a mystery story, the problem has to do with
the solution of the mystery. What is the mystery idea you've chosen?
Is it a crime? Is it something scary? What should the main character
discover? And what — or who — is going to get in the way, so the
solution to the mystery won't be too easy?
- Make a list of clues
that you can use in your story. One should be the crucial
clue. This crucial clue is one piece of important information that
helps the main character finally solve the mystery. The crucial clue
might be something that points directly to the perpetrator of the
crime. For example, maybe one character — Sam — says that he
received a strange telephone call at eight o'clock. Later in the
story, the main character receives information about where all the
suspects were at eight o'clock, remembers what Sam had said about
receiving a call at that time, and knows that it couldn't possibly
have happened. Your detective then realizes that Sam is the
perpetrator.
- Think about "red
herrings." Red herrings are bits of information that
are designed to mislead readers by making them suspect the wrong
characters. Red herrings are fun to include because they make
mysteries harder to solve. Maybe you want readers to suspect the
main character's little brother, who has a real fondness for peanut
butter and grape jelly sandwiches. Suppose your main character finds
smeared jelly fingerprints in a suspicious place. Readers will
immediately think of the little brother's sandwiches — especially
if your main character is disturbed by the jelly stains — and they
won't notice if you slip in a real clue.
- Suspense is an
important ingredient in a mystery story. Footsteps coming
up the stairs in the dark, a doorknob silently turning, a suspect
arriving when he's not expected, an unanswered question about one of
the characters — there are many ways to make your stories
suspenseful. Allow your characters to be scared. Your readers will
identify with him or her, and they'll be scared, too.
- The setting should fit
the mood of the story. Think about where you want your
story to take place. Should it be at night? On a foggy morning?
During a thunderstorm? Maybe the day is sunny and bright, but the
character has to explore the dark passages of a deserted building.
What was that noise? Rats? Footsteps? Describe the dark passages.
Let readers see the building. Write so vividly that readers feel
they are there with your character.
- Look for the best
place in which to begin your story. Mystery stories should
begin with action, with suspense, with something interesting or
exciting happening. Readers should meet the main characters and be
introduced to the mystery right at the beginning.
- Know how your story
will end before you begin to write it. It's easy to begin
writing and surprise yourself on every page, then discover that in
the middle of your story you've written yourself into a box. Think
over various solutions to your character's problem, remembering that
she has to solve the mystery herself. She's in charge. It's her
story.
As you think over ideas, you're going to discard
some of them because you'll see they won't work. When the right solution
comes along, you'll know it, and you'll be able to begin your story.
It's all right for the middle of your story to remain flexible. You
might think of something funny or exciting or interesting for your main
character to do that you hadn't expected when you began writing. It's
the ending that must stay in place. You won't lose your story and have
to begin again with another idea if you know where your main character
is going.
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